Writing is a process, and the first draft is rarely perfect. Strong writers improve their work through revision. After reviewing and revising your literary argument paragraph, what changes did you make to strengthen your writing?

 Prompt Response: When I edited my paragraph, I added more information to my evidence and fixed some things that didn't sound well, I also made sure that my paragraph stayed focused on the main idea.

Summary: Writers improve their work by editing and looking over their drafts. It helps make it stronger and corrects errors.

Reflection: My first draft wasn't perfect but it wasn't bad either, after fixing some errors it sounded stronger and showed that writing takes time.